RealityCheck by the demonic Dar. This is a very odd little story which it took me a couple of readings to decide whether I liked or not. Anyway, read and it see what you make of it. I like stuff which makes me prickle a bit and this one certainly did that!
It ends badly, I think. It's rather clumsily written, though I didn't guess what the twist was going to be, but having established the twist, I think it ought to have ended there, rather than struggling on.
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Date: 2004-07-15 04:19 pm (UTC)It ends badly, I think. It's rather clumsily written, though I didn't guess what the twist was going to be, but having established the twist, I think it ought to have ended there, rather than struggling on.