I'm all for stories which get a reaction and that one I still can't quite make my mind up about. I think your possibly right about the ending although I'm impressed with what Dar is writing generally and I think it will be interesting to watch that writing develop :)
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Date: 2004-07-16 12:53 am (UTC)I'm all for stories which get a reaction and that one I still can't quite make my mind up about. I think your possibly right about the ending although I'm impressed with what Dar is writing generally and I think it will be interesting to watch that writing develop :)